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Short presentation
I live in Moscow, where I work and study. I like learning different foreign languages. I have an elementary level of French and I will start learning Hebrew (When? > soon? next month?)Also I like reading (including in original (Do you mean the language of the author?), painting and snowbording.
Hope to find new friends and interesting people.
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Very good presentation, you got the most if it!
Small improvements;
First correction: as you can see you can make this into one sentence by adding a conjunction in order to make it more fluent.
Second: using the verb to have, (usually) means that you must follow up with an indefinite article. For example:
- I have (got) an apple
- I have (got) an elementary level of French
- They have (got) a vage understanding of this topic
- You guys have never had an expression that looked pleasant
Third: You will be starting the study of another language, so that means it's an action in the Future! If you don't have a solid plan or "proof" for your adventurous future plans means that you must use the simple future: "will". So "you will start learing Hebrew next month." (or next year, or tomorrow, I don't know your endeavours of course ;) )
If you have got questions please ask!
kisses
Short Presentation
I work and study in Moscow. I like learning different (foreign) languages. I have an elementary level of French and I plan to start learning Hebrew.I also like reading (including books in their original language), painting and snowboarding.
Hope to find new friends and interesting people on here.
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