My last holyday
My last holiday was in April. I went to New York. I wanted to go there since a long time ago but I had never had a real opportunity to went there. Always the trip was very expensive for me. However the last winter I found a sale in one website so I told about it to my friends. Few days after we had brought the flights and we’d booked an apartment in www.airbnb.com.
However we had a problem fes days before the trip. A strike was doing by employes of the airplane companie in France. We had scale from Paris to New York. We were scared for our holiday but when we called to the company they changed our scale to Amsterdam.
In conclusion it was a wonderful holidays, the last problem was the strike on the started the the trip and the rest of trip was incredible for all us. We could see a lot of famous place and could enjoy with the nice people.
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My last holiday
My last holiday was in April. I went to New York. I have wanted to go there for a long time but I had never had a real opportunity to go. The trip was very expensive. However, last winter I found a sale on one website so I told my friends about it. A few days after that we bought the flights and booked an apartment on www.airbnb.com.
However we had a problem a few days before the trip. A strike was being held by employees of the airline in France. We had seats from Paris to New York. We were scared for our holiday but when we called the company they changed our seats to Amsterdam.
In conclusion it was a wonderful holiday, the only problem was the strike at the beginning of the trip, the rest of trip was incredible. We saw a lot of famous place and enjoyed them with nice people.
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Sierra's corrections look fine, so I won't correct your whole notebook. I just have a suggestion for one word. Instead of "scale", I think you need the word "layover" (which translates as "la escala").
So...those two sentences could be written like this:
We had a layover scheduled in Paris. We were scared for our holiday, but when we called the company, they changed our layover to Amsterdam.
I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed your visit to New York!
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