Cinema with my family
After my little brother back from school , he wants watching a movie , he say to my father : i want watch movies in cinema , my father agree , and said for mom , and she is said i do not want to go cinema , because I'm pregnant , if i came with you will be annoy for me. After insisting, we told her that going out without her would be bad, finally she agree. We went out to alain mall , we arrived , and went cinema , also my dad was barrier on online, so we entered a movie , when started the movie Start thrill , the movie an hour and a half, after end the movie , we went to dinner , i forget what name the restaurant, its yummy , in the end ,We returned to home , and all of us like this journey and happy.
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Cinema with my family
After my little brother returned back from school (or 'got back from school') , he wanted to wants watch watching a movie , so he said say to my father "i want to watch a movie movies in the cinema", my father agreed , and asked my said for mom and she is said "i don't want to go to the cinema as I'm pregnant do not want to go cinema , because I'm pregnant , if i came, you will be annoy for me". After insisting, we told her that going out without her would be bad, she finally finally she agreed. We went out to alain mall , we arrived , and went cinema , also my dad was barrier (شو هذا؟) on online, so we entered a movie , when the started the movie startedStart thrill , it lasted the movie an hour and a half, after the end of the movie , we went to dinner , i forget the name of what name the restaurant, its yummy.Finallyin the end , we returned to home , and we all liked the all of us like this journey and were happy.
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The main issue was the tenses. You can use 'was' and 'were' if you want to use a present tense verb when you are speaking about the past.
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