Clothes and Smile
I had a tough day while dressing. It was one of those days in which you have to go to many places. I don’t like to go out as a mess! My mom taught me how to dress for each occasion, from simple to more formal if I can say that way. She has good taste when it comes to clothes. Even though I’m an adult, every time we go shopping together, I like to hear her opinion about the clothes I think to buy or much better, I love when she finds some clothes for me because I like what she picks most of the times, and I’m not a fan of fishing for clothes at the stores for a long time.
But, going back to the main point; I had to go to the mall run some business and run into some friends. I wasn’t in the mood, I’m sure about that. I tried on four blouses, two jeans and three pairs of shoes, adding to that, I made my hair two times and nothing seemed to change. I was so upset with myself. Time was passing and I had no idea what else to do, I wanted to take a shower and start over (haha) but I was going to hold up, besides that it was going to be too much!
I poked around my drawer to find some accessories to wear, but again, I didn’t like how my outfit looked. I wondered “is the outfit wrong or it’s me?” Then, I looked at myself in the mirror and smile. No way! I looked so beautiful! It was me and my mood what made me feel and look terrible. How did I pretend to look nice with such a bitter face? I just needed a little smile and not changing an outfit like a crazy.
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Clothes and Smile
I had a tough day while dressing when it came to getting dressed. It was one of those days in which you have to go to many places. I don’t like to go out as a mess! My mom taught me how to dress for each occasion, from simple to more formal if I can say it that way. She has good taste when it comes to clothes. Even though I’m an adult, every time we go shopping together, I like to hear her opinion about the clothes I think to buy or much better, I love when she finds some clothes for me because I like what she picks most of the times, and I’m not a fan of fishing for clothes at the stores for a long time. This last sentence is a run-on sentence. Here is one suggestion on changing it: Even though I'm an adult, every time we go shopping together, I like to hear her opinion about the things I like. Even better, I love when she finds clothes for me, since I like what she picks most of the time. Plus, I'm not a fan of hunting for clothes at the stores for a long time.But, going back to the main point; I had to go to the mall to run some business errands, and run ran into some friends. I wasn’t in the mood, I’m sure about that that's for sure. I tried on four blouses, two jeans and three pairs of shoes, adding to that, I made did my hair two times and nothing seemed to change. I was so upset with myself. Time was passing and I had no idea what else to do, I wanted to take a shower and start over (haha) but I was going to hold up be late?, besides that it was going to be too much!
I poked around in my drawer to find some accessories to wear, but again, I didn’t like how my outfit looked. I wondered “is this the outfit wrong or it’s is it me?” Then, I looked at myself in the mirror and smile smiled. No way! I looked so beautiful! It was me and my mood what which made me feel and look terrible. How did I pretend to look nice with such a bitter face? I just needed a little smile and not changing an outfit like a crazy. instead of changing my outfit like a crazy person.
Good job Luisa, you have an advanced level of English. Just minor corrections :)
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