The Food
One of the things that I like much, is the good food.
A time ago to today, I changed my style of eat , before I liked eat a lot the red meat, rice, deserts, soda pop, pastas on alls your forms, and the bad that I did eat in a lot amount. That to did that my weight was a lot, and by that I would can't do exercise very well.
So today I changed the form to eat, now I prefer to eat the health food; vegetables, chicken , fruits, a lot water , natural juice, and now like these that, I can to do my exercises very well , so my weight is better and I feel health.
Now like much the vegetarian food, and so I follow with that form to eat.
¡ Eat healthing is life, do it !
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Excellent advice!
I have corrected some punctuation and highlighted some changed that make your expressions sound more natural.
The Food
One of the things that I like very much is good food.Some time ago, I changed my style of eating. Before, I liked to eat a lot the red meat, rice, desserts, soda pop, and pasta in all forms. The bad that I did eat, I ate in large amounts. This added to my weight and made it difficult to exercise well. (you could say exercise "properly")
So now, I have changed my way of eating. Now, I prefer to eat healthy food such as vegetables, chicken, fruits. I drink a lot of water and natural juice. Now I can to do my exercises very well! My weight is better and I feel healthy.
Now I enjoy vegetarian food and follow this type of diet.
Eat healthily is life! Do it!
Hope this is helpful.
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The Food
One thing that I like (very) much, is the good food.Quite some time ago, I changed my style of eating , before I liked eat a lot of the red meat, rice, desserts, soda pop, pastas of all forms, and the worst part was the amount of these foods that I ate. It had a big effect on my weight, and by that I mean that I couldn't exercise very well.
So today I have better eating habits, now I prefer to eat the healthy foods; vegetables, chicken , fruits, a lot water , natural juice, and now thanks to this, I can to do my exercises very well/much better , so my weight is better and I feel healthier.
Now I really like vegetarian food, and so I follow those eating habits.
Eating healthy is life, do it !
Instead of saying eating forms or style of eating, it would sound better to say "eating habits".
"Desserts" was just misspelled and missing an S."Desert" is like the Sahara Desert and "Desert" is a sweet snack. Common mistake even for native English writers.
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