Hamlet story part 1
I've read the story of Hamlet and I tried to summarize it to practice writing in English, I will separate my summary into two part because it's long.
Hamlet is a play written by William Shakespeare, The story talk about a prince called Hamlet lives in the royal castle of Denmark.
After the death of his father which is king Hamlet, his mother married her husband brother and they all live in the castle with Hamlet. Also the advisor of the king lives in the castle with his son and his daughter.
One day after the funeral of the king Hamlet was held, some of guards told Hamlet that they have seen a ghost of his dead father, at first Hamlet didn't believe them, but one day later he saw the ghost and tried to talk to it.
The ghost of his father told Hamlet that he didn't die because of a snake bite, he died because his brother puts a poison in his ear, he wanted to be the king and marry his brother's wife. The ghost asks Hamlet to take a revenge without hurting Hamlet mother’s.
Hamlet got really angry by that and starts to think how he can take the revenge from his uncle, while he was thinking one of his friend came to him and told him there will be a play in the castle and everyone will go, so Hamlet had an idea to make sure about what the ghost said, he went to the actors of the play and told them to change the scenario to look like the story of how his uncle murdered his father.
Everyone went to the play including his uncle and his mother, when the play came to the part of a man puts a poison in the king's ear, his uncle shouted angrily to stop this stupid play and he went out, that's time Hamlet knew it was right all what the ghost said.
After the play was finished Hamlet's mother asked Hamlet to come to her room to have a talk with him, when he came to her room she shouted at him because of the play and how it's made his uncle angry, Hamlet told her angrily that his uncle is a murderer and he have to take a revenge, by that time a sound from behind the curtain in the room came telling Hamlet to stop what he is doing, Hamlet thought that is a thief and pulls out his sword and stabbed through the curtain to the sound, when he finished he take off the curtain to see who behind it, he found the advisor and he was died, he was behind the curtain because his uncle told him to do that.
When the advisor's daughter knew that her father died she got mad, then she climbed a tree and fall form it into the river and died.
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Hamlet story part 1
I've read the story of Hamlet and I have summarised it to practice writing in English, I will separate my summary into two parts. because it's long. (this is optional it can be removed)Hamlet is a play written by William Shakespeare, The story is about a prince called Hamlet who lives in the royal castle of Denmark.
After the death of his father which is king Hamlet, his mother married her husbands brother and they all lived in the castle with Hamlet. Also the advisor of the king lives in the castle with his son and his daughter.
One day after the funeral of king Hamlet was held, some of guards told Hamlet that they have seen a ghost of his dead father, at first Hamlet didn't believe them, but one day later he saw the ghost and tried to talk to it.
The ghost of his father told Hamlet that he didn't die because of a snake bite, he died because his brother put poison in his ear, he wanted to be the king and marry his brother's wife. The ghost asks Hamlet to take revenge without hurting Hamlet's mother.
Hamlet got really angry by that and starts to think how he can take the revenge from his uncle, while he was thinking one of his friends came to him and told him there will be a play in the castle and everyone will go, so Hamlet had an idea to be sure about what the ghost had said, he went to the actors of the play and told them to change the scenario to look like the story of how his uncle murdered his father.
Everyone went to the play including his uncle and his mother, when the play came to the part where a man puts a poison in the king's ear, his uncle shouted angrily to stop this stupid play and he went out, that's the time Hamlet knew it was right what the ghost had said.
After the play was finished Hamlet's mother asked Hamlet to come to her room to have a talk with him, when he went to her room she shouted at him because of the play and how it made his uncle angry, Hamlet told her angrily that his uncle is a murderer and he has to have revenge, at that time came a sound from behind the curtain in the room came telling Hamlet to stop what he is doing, Hamlet thought that it was a thief and pulls out his sword and stabbed through the curtain at the sound, when he finished he drew the curtain to see who was behind it, he found the advisor and he was died, he was behind the curtain because his uncle told him to be there.
When the advisor's daughter knew that her father was dead she got mad, then she climbed a tree and fall form it into the river and died.
Not too bad, a bit jerky in places. The advisors daughters father did not die he was killed/murdered therefore was dead. would be the best way to say it.
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