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My New Vocabulary for Today : Part 51
Hi, I'm trying to make some sentences using the new vocabulary I learnt today.If there are any grammar mistakes and/or weird word choices, please correct them. Thanks.
1) This procedural is quadruple four times annoying as compared to the previous one.
2) I've just got rid of the trash thoroughly from the sewerage system.
3) This well water may need to be purified before drinking.
4) Those The impure water goes into a septic system.
5) You should punctuate the sentence likewise.
6) In a On hindsight, I did choose chose the right way.
7) When it comes to finding a job in another country, skills are more important than qualifications.
8) Lagoon and coral reefs provide diverse benefits to their the inhabitants.
9) They barter reef resources such as prawns, crabs, and molluscs.
My New Vocabulary for Today : Part 51
Hi, I'm trying to make some sentences using the new vocabulary I learnt today.If there are any grammar mistakes and/or weird word choices, please correct them. Thanks.
1) This procedural is quadruple annoying compared to the previous one.
This sounds very slangy. I wouldn't say it like this, but I could see someone else saying it. However, do you really mean "procedural" like a "procedural drama"? or do you mean "procedure"?
2) I've just thoroughly gotten rid of the trash thoroughly from in the sewerage system.
3) This well water may need to be purified before drinking.
4) Those That impure water goes into a septic system.
"Water" is uncountable
5) You should punctuate sentence likewise.
I don't understand what you're trying to say in sentence (5).
6) In a hindsight, I chose the right way.
Not wrong, but a little weird. Usually, you talk about hindsight when you make a mistake, not when you do something correctly.
7) When it comes to finding a job in another country, skills are more important than qualifications.
8) Lagoons and coral reefs provide diverse benefits to the inhabitants.
A little ambiguous. When you say inhabitants, do you mean people like on an island? or do you mean animals? You wouldn't normally use the word "inhabitants" for non-human animals
9) They barter reef resources such as prawns, crabs, and molluscs.
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