Good life

Living a good life is very important for every one. So, there are many different idea about how to live a good life . And , having a good life it mean having an education, safe place to live, clean food and water, and prospects of a better future. Many philosophers say that to live a good life the person must be happy and many people are unhappy because they don't try to achieve goals. The person must set goals for them selves and work toward accomplishment them . But remember you have to work smart not hard.

Good life

Living a good life is very important for every one. There are many different ideas on how to live a good life . Having a good life means having an education, safe place to live, clean food and water, and prospects of a better future. Many philosophers say that to live a good life people must be happy and many people are unhappy because they don't try to achieve goals. People must set goals for themselves and work towards accomplishing them . But remember you have to work smart not hard.

Good try Amna! I can't fault the feedback you have been given by the other tutor. Keep practicing as practice makes perfect! :)