one of my experiences.
One of my reasons to learn english is to get a better job in Mexico and save enough money to travel a long time. I started studying english since 2017 to achieve it. Every single day I study for 3 hours and I go to my English course at CELE UNAM. That course was the best decision I took. When started to study english, I wanted to be a designer because I love art now, however I would like to study another degree to have more time to travel and know my country. I have had good experiences to talking to people from other countries. I met a good friend from Egypt and she help me with english and I help her to learn spanish. Next year I will apply to a student exchange to know Europe, hence I will study every single day to get my goal.
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one of my experiences.
One of my reasons for learning English is to get a better job in Mexico, so I can save enough money to go travelling. I started studying English in 2017 to achieve this. Every single day, I study for 3 hours, and I go to an English course at CELE UNAM. That course has been the best decision I've made. When I started to study English, I wanted to be a designer because I love art, but I would like to study another degree, so I can have more time to travel and see my own country. I have had good experiences to talking to people from other countries. I met a good friend from Egypt, and she helped me with English, while I helped her to learn Spanish. Next year I will apply to a student exchange so I can visit Europe, so I will study every single day to reach my goal.GREEN: rephrasing, word choice
PINK: grammar, punctuation
I could understand everything just fine, and I've just reworded some things to sound more natural. You just need to check punctuation and practice phrasing things more fluidly.
- to describe reasoning, you usually say "reason for ____ ing (something)", like "my reason for going to the doctor". Here, you could also say "One of the reasons why I want to learn English is...".
- instead of "travel for a long time", you can just say "go travelling", because we understand that to mean a long time.
- when you say "know my country" or "know Europe", are you thinking of conocer? In English, we'd say something like 'see', 'visit' or 'explore' when talking about a place (if it's a person, we say 'get to know').
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