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The first day in Melbourne I have never been to America, but I think Melbourne looks like a big American city. I have never seen so many skyscrapers nearby small historic buildings. We live here in a hotel on 14 floors and we have an amazing view of the city. I have such a view for the first time in my life, it is amazing, though the hotel is not expensive at all. Today we were walking around the city and caught a free historic tram which stops near the hotel. There was audioguide inside the tram and we have known that Melbourne has a biggest tram's network in the world! Now we can say that in comparison with Melbourne Canberra is a small village with rabbits and ducks walking around your house. :)

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The first day in Melbourne

I have never been to America, but I think Melbourne looks like a big American city. I have never seen so many skyscrapers nearby small historic buildings. We live here in a hotel on the 14th floors and we have an amazing view of the city. I To have such a view for the first time in my life, it is amazing, though the hotel is not expensive at all. Today we were walking around the city and caught a free historic tram which stops near the hotel. There was audioguide inside the tram and we have known Knew that Melbourne has a biggest tram's networkin the world!( one of the biggest tram network in the world or the biggest tram network in the world!) Now we can say that in comparison with Melbourne Canberra is a small village with rabbits and ducks walking around your house. :)
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The first day in Melbourne

Although I have never been to America, I think Melbourne looks like a big American city. I have never seen so many skyscrapers nearby small historic buildings. We have an amazing view of the city because We are living in a hotel on 14 floors. I have such a view for the first time in my life, it is amazing, though the hotel is not expensive at all. (The whole sentence needs to be paraphrased )Today we were walking around the city and caught a free historic tram which stops near the hotel. There was audioguide inside the tram and we knew that Melbourne has the biggest tram's network in the world! Now we can say that in comparison with Melbourne, Canberra is a small village with houses overran by rabbits and ducks walking around. :)
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Yes sorry you are correct. Just wanted to be sure. In that case it is a well written piece, with little correction needed. Now we know Irina did not want to write "I have never been to Australia before, but I think Melbourne looks like ----- ."
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"Melbourne looks like a big American city.", meaning she is comparing Melbourne to any big American city.
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Do you mean Australia?

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