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PLEASE , CORRECT MY MISTAKES IN THIS STORY When I was walking along the street I saw to Annie an old friend of college on bicycle, I have not seen her two years ago, but I remember that she told me that her father had given her a new car so I ask her about her new possession , and she told me that she took out a loan and she didn’t pay it off as soon as she could, because she was spending a lot of money and Now she has “ a rainy day “, for this reason she sold her car , now she only has a bicycle … it was difficult for her, however she is getting over it , she never give up . The good news is that Annie is start again and she wants to change some bad habits and she hope to set aside money each month in a savings account and keep track of how much she spend each week. On the other hand, she moved near to mi neighborhood so I will see her more times, and together go out to do exercises at the park or something like that. She is my friend, a great girl, with a lot of problems but she always has a giant smile, good humor sense and good vibes .

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PLEASE , CORRECT MY MISTAKES IN THIS STORY

When I was walking along the street I saw to Annie, an old friend of from college on a bicycle. I have not seen her two years ago for two years, but I remember that she told me that her father had given her a new car.  So I ask her about her new possession and she told me that she took out a loan and she didn’t pay it off as soon as she could should have, because she was spending a lot of money. and Now she has “ a rainy day “, for this reason she sold her car. Now she only has a bicycle.  It was difficult for her, however she is getting over it. She never gives up .

The good news is that Annie is starting again and she wants to change some bad habits. and She hopes to set aside money each month in a savings account and keep track of how much she spends each week.

On the other hand, she moved near to mi my neighborhood so I will see her more times often. and We plan together to go out to do exercises at in the a park or something like that.
She is my friend, a great girl, with a lot of problems but she always has a giant smile, good sense of humor sense and good vibes .

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