I'm in love.
I don't know why people think that if you are in love then its means that you love some boy/girl.I'm in love with my dream. I liked to become fighter pilot since my childhood. I can't express my feelings how much I'm in love with my this dream. But unfortunately I couldn't become fighter pilot because my eyesight was weak. May be my dream can come true but my family don't take it serious. They were failed to understand my feelings. It gave me pain. Whenever I see an aeroplane flying over my house, I feel really bad, I feel like someone is snatching my life my heart and taking it away from me. It really hurts, it bring tears in my eyes. Yes, I'm in love, the love which will never heal me. Maybe you people think that I'm stupid, but it's reality I'm in love.
I'm trying hard to get good job. One think is very sure no matter how good and high level job I will grt, but my heart will never forget my first and last love.
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I'm in Love [In the main title always capitalize the first, last, and all important words. Never include an ending period, but do use other ending punctuation such as "?" or "!".]
I don't know why people think that if you are in love then it means that you love some boy/girl. I'm in love with my dream. I have wanted to become a fighter pilot since my childhood. I can't express my feelings how much I'm in love with my/this* dream. But unfortunately I couldn't become a fighter pilot because my eyesight was weak. Maybe my dream can come true but my family doesn't take it seriously. They failed** to understand my feelings. It gave me pain. Whenever I see an aeroplane flying over my house, I feel really bad, I feel like someone is snatching my life, my heart and taking it away from me. It really hurts, it brings tears in my eyes. Yes, I'm in love, the love which will never heal me. Maybe you people think that I'm stupid, but it's a reality that I'm in love.I'm trying hard to get a good job. One thing is very sure, no matter how good and high level a job I will get, my heart will never forget my first and last love.***
[* Use only one of these words, wither "my" or "this".
** Or: "They were failing to understand ..."
*** Both "no matter" and "but" have the same grammar meaning, but you should only use one of them, not both. For example, the other way to write your sentence is: "On thing is very sure, I may get a good, high level job but my heart will never ..."]
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