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My roles. As I am getting older I start thinking about things I had done in the past. I’m sure there were plenty of things I can be sorry for. For example: offending someone, wasting time and money, loving someone who didn’t deserve it, not taking advantage of good opportunities, or simply not being nice to someone. At the same time there are many things I can be proud of – working hard and supporting my loved ones, taking care of my kid and parents, being patient with them, being honest and delicate at the same time, if it’s possible. And being independent, don’t forget, it’s very important to be independent. Thinking about my life I realized that I don’t have to regret the past. The point is without the mistakes I made I wouldn’t be able to become what I am. Speaking of my life roles I can say that I use to juggle a few things at the same time. I’m a loving and carrying mom. I’m a cheerful and beloved wife, at least I hope this is truth. I’m an auditor and chief accountant. I’m an ambitious and hardworking student, who is studying English not only for travelling, but also for moving to another country. Also I’m an opera lover, and a dancer, and a person who is interested in politics. Sometimes I can be harsh and critical, this is from shortage of free time. But my family prefers me to be lazy and carefree. I’m not sure it’s great to be that way. But I am what I am.

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My roles.

As I am getting older I start thinking about things I had have done in the past. I’m sure there were are plenty of things I can be sorry for. For example: offending someone, wasting time and money, loving someone who didn’t deserve it, not taking advantage of good opportunities, or simply not being nice to someone. At the same time, there are many things I can be proud of – working hard and supporting my loved ones, taking care of my kid child (it's not wrong to say "kid", but with the tone of this text, "child" sounds better) and parents, being patient with them, being honest and delicate tactful at the same time, if it’s possible. And being independent. Don’t forget, it’s very important to be independent.
Thinking about my life I realized that I don’t have to regret the past. The point is without the mistakes I made, I wouldn’t be able to become what who I am.
Speaking of my life roles, I can say that I am used to juggling a few things at the same time. I’m a loving and carrying caring mom. I’m a cheerful and beloved wife, at least I hope this is the truth. I’m an auditor and chief accountant. I’m an ambitious and hardworking student, who is studying English not only for travelling, but also for moving to another country. I'm also an opera lover, and a dancer, and a person who is interested in politics.
Sometimes I can be harsh and critical; this is from shortage of free time. But my family prefers me to be lazy and carefree.
I’m not sure it’s great to be that way. But I am what I am.


Your text is very well written and very interesting to read! Good job!

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Andrea, thank you for your advice.
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I definitely agree, the past is the past and we shouldn’t dwell on past mistakes or regrets. Rather let’s accept the past and leave it where it is, for it is never coming back. Enjoy the present for it is a gift and like you said it’s our worldly experiences that molds the person we are today! Great writing, maybe change the word kid to child. :)

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