Describing a film for correption. Hello. My name is Manuel and I´m going to talk about the film "Dirty Dancing". This film was directed by Emile Ardolino and It isn´t based in any book that I know.

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Describing a film for correption. Hello. My name is Manuel and I´m going to talk about the film "Dirty Dancing". This film was directed by Emile Ardolino and It isn´t based in any book that I know. It stars is Patrick Swayze as Jhonny and Jennifer Grey as Baby. The film is set in United States in the 60s. It is about a younger girl who was on wacation in a resort with her family. The resort´s name was Kellerman´s situated in Catskill Mountains in New York. Baby is a good student and the next year she will go to the university to study economics. Her fathers believe she don´t get the wrong way. But one nigth, she mets Jhony in one small party in the resort. She loved he and they start being together. Father´s Baby didn´t acepted this relantion and this moment, she´s angry. In the end, Baby dancys with Jhony in the end resort´s party an her fathers acepted Jhony. I strongly recomented this film because is romantic, dancing and drama. Thans so much. Help me with my correcption, please.

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Hi Manuel,

There are quite a few corrections for the spelling and sentence structure, but the most important are as follows;

1) In a film review when you discuss the plot you usually do so in the present simple tense. So for instance "about a young girl who is on vacation" or "Baby is a good student and she plans to go to university to study economics".

2) It's not a good idea in a film review to tell the reader the ending of the film, because then they have less reason to watch it. It's better to concentrate on what you like or didn't like and the reasons why.

I presume someone will help you with the specific corrections, but that's my input at this stage. I hope it's helpful to you.

Best of luck

Andrew

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