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Part 1 -
My Summer
My Today's writing is about my summer holidays in my village [insert name of village here], which is located approximately in 40 minutes from downtown Valencia center. This place village is so very beautiful and charming because the people here is are really friendly and the weather is perfect to avoid for avoiding Valencia's heat. I have been there here for 2 weeks with my whole family, since all of us go there come here in on these dates in order to enjoy the weather and the village festivals which that started the second week we were here there.
The first week I tried to do different activities things with my friends, like taking a walk, shopping for food, and other stuff going to other villages to watch football championships with because I have a friend with who that I played play football with in the same team every summer. just with the goal of winning some small championships and for fun, and we were planning the festivals, that is, stuff we were going to do.
Part 2 -
And the second week, I spent almost the whole time entire second week going to the late night parties of in my village, which are usually draw/attract plenty of people from other villages. My daily routine was completely different during this week, whether if you compare this one with the previous one, since I went to the bed at 6am and I tried to sleep in (almost the whole morning!) as far often as possible so I could to rest a little bit before the next party. From my point of view, it would be impossible to follow this routine for too many days because I think that the breakfast is one of the most important meals and so my body wouldn't be able to handle so many late nights of partying be really wasted right now, but fortunately the village festivals just last one week. During the festivals, there were no problems and nobody argued, so that I'm happy with my summer holiday experience.
After these two weeks, I went back to my home to take me a little break before starting returning to work.
Thank everybody to for helping me to improve my English skills, especially my writing, and for correcting the text.
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