My favorite.
HI , I'm fatima from UAE and my country is rich by many many kind of food like meat , vegetabels ,fruit and many kind of grain such as rice and wheat but for me i like all of them i eat all kind of meat fish,beef,mutton and chicken excepting ham also all kind of vegetabels especially those kind apparent in rainy season but for fruit i like all but my favorite one for eat is mango but for fruit juice i like so much citurs fruit juice because the wheather in my country is so hot, so i need to keep my mood and nerves calm.As well my favorite food are the dessert. I like the chocolate cake, I used to eat when a was a child , because I was helping my mother to do it, and then I took a little piece of cake and smell and slowly eat with a good glass of soda. I think prefer eat it because I helped to did it.
but really it a good option as a dessert affer a good lunch or dinner.
Search from various English teachers...
Corrections · 3
2
My favorite foods.
Hi, my name is Fatima and I am from the UAE. My country is rich because of the huge quantity of food available such as meat, vegetables, fruit, and many kinds of grains.
I like to eat all kinds of meat, such as fish, beef, mutton, and chicken. I also like to eat a variety of vegetables, especially the ones available in the rainy season. As for fruit, I like them all but my favorite fruit is mango. In my country, since it's so hot, I like to drink citrus fruit juice. As for desserts, I like chocolate cake because I used to eat it a lot when I was a child. I would help my mother bake the cake, and eat small pieces. It would smell great. I would slowly eat the cake to savor the flavor and have a glass of soda as well. Because I helped make it, it would taste better. The cake is a good option to eat after lunch or dinner.
Good journal! Keep working at your English! :)
0
Fatima, don’t be afraid to use full stops and have a look at the good correction done for you below.
Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!
Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!
Start Learning Today
