Across the park
Sitting at a café table across the park from my sister, I met a man who said that if I walked across the bridge wearing these clothes I might come across as a pimp. A smile spread across the face of the waiter as she overheard the man who was dressed in a white robe with a cross painted across his chest. Suddenly, lightning sizzled across the sky and the three of us we went inside as the rain came.
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Across the park
Sitting at a café table across the park from my sister, [Understandable, but a better way to phrase it could be: Sitting at a café table across from my sister on the other side of the park," gives me a better visualization of the scenerio.]I met a man who said that if I walked kept walking across the bridge wearing these clothes, I might come across as a pimp.
A smile then spread across the face of the waiter, as she overheard the man who was dressed in a white robe with a cross painted across his chest.
Then suddenly, lightning sizzled across the sky - and the three of us we went inside as the rain came.
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