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It was a wonderful day. I dressed up in five minutes, and got ready to go for picnic. Than I went to my cousin's house. My cousin and her wife come with me. It was first time, I went with my cousin's. I enjoyed a lot.

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It was a wonderful day.

I (got) dressed in five minutes, and got ready to go to the picnic. Then I went to my cousin's house. My cousin and her wife* came with me. It was the first time I went with my cousin and her wife. I enjoyed it a lot.


*I'm assuming the cousin is a woman married to another woman

If the cousin is a woman married to a man, it would be "her husband"

If the cousin is a man married to a woman, it would be "his wife"

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It was a wonderful day.

I dressed  in five minutes, and got ready to go to a picnic. Than I went to my cousin's house. My cousin and   his wife came with me. It was first time that  I went with my cousin's. I enjoyed  it  a lot.



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It was a wonderful day.

I dressed up in five minutes, and got ready to go for a picnic. Then  I went to my cousin's house. My cousin and her  husband came with me. It was for first time, when I went with my cousin's family. I enjoyed it a lot.

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