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Afternoon Baking on Friday Evening I made plain and cocoa biscuits today. Those are in the shape of teapots, rabbits and hearts which look very adorable. I like baking because I enjoy following the sequential process of measuring ingredients, mixing and putting them in a oven. Unlike cooking meals, baking often involves accuracy. It gives me a sense of accomplishment. During the process of baking, I usually think about persons who I want to share the sweets with.

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Afternoon Baking on Friday Evening

I made plain and cocoa biscuits today. Those are in the shape of teapots, rabbits and hearts which look very adorable. I like baking because I enjoy following the sequential process of measuring ingredients, mixing and putting them in a an oven. Unlike cooking meals, baking often involves accuracy. It gives me a sense of accomplishment. During the process of baking, I usually think about persons who I want to share the sweets with.


When the first letter of the word after the article souds like Vowel, you have to use AN instead of A.

Ex. This is a house. This is an apple.

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Afternoon Baking on Friday Evening

I made plain and cocoa biscuits today. Those are in the shape of teapots, rabbits and hearts which look very adorable. I like baking because I enjoy following the sequential process of measuring ingredients, mixing and putting them in an oven. Unlike cooking meals, baking often involves accuracy. It gives me a sense of accomplishment. During the process of baking, I usually think about people persons who I want to share the sweets with.


Personally, I would use "they are in the shape of..." rather than "those." It just sounds more natural to me. "They" can refer to non-living things. 

Alternatively, your last sentence could read "... I usually think about the people I want to share the sweets with."

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