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diary 1#Choose Courses I am a freshman in college,it's totally excellent that I can ''choose'' course by myself! Woo! I chose basic photography, table tennis,I love table tennis! I still have a lot of required courses,like design history,basic design,design sketch,design and work ethics(seems boring TT),and model making(I LOVE DIY : )) I also have a chance to choose courses to two colleges nearby my college,because we are in the union,which allow limit quota for students from other college.I am looking forward to it.

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diary 1#Choose Courses

I am a freshman in college. It's totally excellent that I can ''choose'' my courses myself! Woo!

I chose Basic Photography and table tennis. I love table tennis!

I still have a lot of required courses, like Design History, Basic Design, Design Sketch, Design and Work Ethics (seems boring TT), and Model Making (I LOVE DIY : )).

I also have a chance to choose courses at two colleges nearby my college, because we are in the union, which allows a limited quota of students from the other colleges to attend. I am looking forward to it.


Names of courses should be capitalized (though not subjects, e.g. algebra). The names of some of the courses sound a bit unusual. "Design History" reads better as "History of Design". I'm not quite sure what "Design Sketch" is, perhaps "Design Sketching" or just "Sketching" would fit better.

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