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H/W make a story about some festival Hello, please check my today home work. It is small story with simple words about Burning Man festival Burning Man is an annual event in the United States in the Black Rock Desert of northwest Nevada. The event takes its name from culmination, the symbolic ritual burning of a large wooden model ("The Man"). The fastival begins at the Monday at the last week of august and culmination happens at the night of Saturday. During the week in the desert created a huge modern arts of the most fantastic forms. Many of the mutant vehicles move around the territory and all members have strange costumes. Artists who come to the desert give performances. On several dance floors around the clock work DJs. The first burning of a small wooden man was in 1986 on the beach near by San Francisco from small group of friends. Then the festival expanded and moved to the desert in the Nevada. In 2015 the festival was attended more then 70 thousand people.

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H/W make a story about some festival

Hello, please check my today home work.
It is a small story with simple words about the Burning Man festival

Burning Man is an annual event in the United States in the Black Rock Desert of northwest Nevada.
The event takes its name from culmination, the symbolic ritual burning of a large wooden model ("The Man").
The festival begins at on the Monday at of the last week of August and culmination happens at the night of Saturday. on Saturday night.
During the week in the desert created a huge modern arts of the most fantastic forms are created. Many of the mutant vehicles move around the territory and all members have strange costumes. Artists who come to the desert give performances. (Musicians give performances.) On several dance floors, DJs work around the clock. around the clock work DJs. 
The first burning of a small wooden man was in 1986 on the a beach near by San Francisco from by a small group of friends. Then the festival expanded and moved to the desert in the Nevada. In 2015, the festival was attended more then than 70 seventy thousand people.
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No, but I'd like to. I heard about this festival many times. I think it artistic and crazy. And I like it
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Are you going on this festival?

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