First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I am a very outgoing girl from china. It's amazing to find this website. I hope to make a lot of friends here.Now I live in Beijing, which is such a beautiful city.I'd like to invite my firends come to Beijing. I like dancing.I like footing. I like reading.I like…… all the beautiful things in life. I believe the key of the life is experience.I believe the happniess of life is making people feel happy.I really really love life. I love all the things happende to me.
I think I can be a good teacher,helping you kindly and patiently while learning what I could learn from you. So if you want to make friends with me, not to wait! my Email :[email protected]
Nice to meet you ,my friends.
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself.
I am a very outgoing girl from China. It was amazing to find this website. I hope to make a lot of friends here._Now I’m living in Beijing, which is such a beautiful city. _I'd like to invite my new friends to come to Beijing. I like dancing, footing, reading…I like…… all the beautiful things in life. I believe the key to life is experience. _I believe happiness in life is making people feel happy. _I really, really love life. I love all the things thatarehappening to me.
I think I can be a good teacher, _ Iwouldhelp you kindly and patiently while youlearn what you could learn from me. So if you want to make friends with me, don’t wait! My Email is: _[email protected]
Nice to meet you, _my friends.
**(_) Necessary spaces after periods and commas.
**It was nice to meet you, too!! Regards!! :D
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You have tried your best. I think the repeation of "like" is uncessary.
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