This is a good start! Here are a few some suggestions.

My Start

Hi! I'm from Brazil and I speak Portuguese.
I live in a small city that is a very quiet place.
I love learning new things including languages.
I'm have just started to learn English, but I hope to improve daily.

Hope this helps

THE BEGINNING OF MY LEARNING EXPERIENCE

Hi! I'm from Brazil and I speak Portuguese language. I lived in a quiet and small city. I love to learn new ideas and knowledge about other languages. I'm starting to learn English language and aspire to enhance my English skills every day.

My start

Hi! I'm from Brazil and i speak portuguese.
I Live in city more  that is very quiet and small.
I Love learn new's new thinks things and new's  new languages.
I'm I have just starting to learn english and wait  want to improve each day.

Excellent work!