Life of youth
In our country there are two types of youth. Some lead a good way of life and others are not very. Some young people prefer sports. Almost every day go to the gym and do physical exercises. They eat healthy food, that is, they lead a healthy lifestyle. But there is another type of youth. They like to go to parties almost every evening. Eat a lot of harmful food. That is, they live to eat and go somewhere. Of course there is nothing wrong with spending time for entertainment. But we must remember that we must be healthy. If we eat a lot of harm, then it will lead to some kind of illness. You need to appreciate yourself and your time. And to be such a youth that someone will remember forever and set an example.
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In our country there are two types of youth. Some lead a good
way of life and others who are careless and insincere. Some young people prefer to play sports. Almost every day they go to
the gym and do physical exercises. They eat healthy food, that is, they
lead a healthy lifestyle. But there is another type of youth. They like to go to
parties almost every evening and
eat a lot of unhealthy food. That is, they live to eat and prefer to eat out. Of
course there is nothing wrong with spending time out for entertainment. But we must remember that
we must try to stay healthy. If we eat a lot of unhealthy food,
then it will lead to some kind of illness. You need to appreciate your health and your
time. And to become such a
youth that you can set an example for others to follow.
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Life of youth
In our country there are two types of youth. Some lead a good way of life and others do not. Some young people prefer sports. They go to the gym almost everyday and do physical exercise. They eat healthy food and lead a healthy lifestyle. But there is another type of youth. They like to go to parties almost every evening. Eat a lot of unhealthy food. They live to eat and go out. Of course there is nothing wrong with spending time for entertainment but we must remember that we should be healthy. If we eat a lot of unhealthy food, then it could lead to some kind of illness. You need to appreciate yourself and your time and be a youth that someone will remember forever and set an example.0
Well done Diana. Try not to begin written sentences with conjunctions such as but/and.
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