I'm a foodie.
I remember a time when I went to a well-kown restaurant during a vacation several years ago
I'm a big fan of going famouse restaurant
I'm a foodie. Trying new foods and restaurants is one of my favorite hobbies.
That was a very nice place for foodies like me.
l went to a well-known seafood restaurant
There was a long line of foodies outside of that restaurant.
So I probably waited for about two hours.
The dish was done just the way I like it.
The food tasted extra good that day because I was literally starving.
eventually, I pigged out
I got severe indigestion so I vomited several times.
I went to the pharmacy, and I got some medicine.
I took some medicine to get better.
But back then the food tasted amazing.
by any chance, are you a foodie?
I'd like to know the proper connection between sentences!
I'd like to know more about natural English expressions and correct the sentence as if I were talking to a friend.
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I'm a foodie.
I went to a well-known restaurant whilst on holiday several years ago.I'm a big fan of going to famous restaurants because I'm a foodie. Trying new foods and going to restaurants are some of my favourite hobbies.
It was a very nice place for foodies like me.
l went to a well-known seafood restaurant
and there was a long line of foodies outside the restaurant. I waited for about two hours.
The dish was done just the way I like it and the food tasted lovely because I was literally starving.
I pigged out and got severe indigestion so I vomited several times.
I went to the pharmacy and I got some medicine to make me feel better.
Are you a foodie by any chance?
I'd like to know the proper connection between sentences!
I'd like to know more about natural English expressions and correct the sentence as if I were talking to a friend.
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