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A PART-TIME JOB I wanna talk something about my job. I had had a part-time job for almost 2 years, I worked for an entertainment company for the child. Honestly, I pretty like that. But at the age of 20, I really want more and more experience and find out strengths and hobbies ( hopefully going to be passion). So I quit, feeling a little bit sad, I have had many relationships but I have to. I'm applying a new one and hope that will be alright.

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A PART-TIME JOB

I wanna talk something would like to talk about my job. I had have had a part-time job for almost 2 years, I worked  with children at for an entertainment company for the child. Honestly, I pretty like that. enjoy it but at the age of 20, I really want more and more life experience and to find out my strengths and explore possible hobbies ( hopefully going to be I will find a passion). So I quit, feeling a little bit sad, I have had many good relationships with my colleagues but I have to move on. I'm applying for a new one job and hope that it will be alright more suitable.


Hello, I made a few changes, I think that is what you wanted to say but could be wrong. It's not easy to write in another language and this is a very good start. 
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