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ESSAY: Advantages and disadvantages of reciving differents types of presents. (Task: Explain which of these types of presents is best to receive: luxuries or handmade items) Every year when my friends’ birthdays are coming, I start to think about which would be the perfect present for them. It might be an expensive luxurious item or maybe a charming handmade article; both alternatives seem to be feasible. However, in my opinion, to receive a handmade present is the best option by far. Being unaffordable for the most, people feel happiness and gratitude when they receive a deluxe product as a gift. Although, some people feel uncomfortable and overwhelmed because they have the sense of they do not deserve such as expensive gifts. Others, even feel afraid of exhibiting or using this type of articles due to the high risk to be stolen. In contrast, there are many advantages in receiving a gift made by another person. Firstly, to be in possession of a unique and original piece, which was created especially for you, will make you feel appreciated by the person who gives it to you. Secondly, handmade items allow saving money because it is an opportunity to use old stuff and recycle it. Probably, the main disadvantages of crafting are that this activity consumes time and requires a minimum of abilities to fabricate an object that does not look like a disaster. In conclusion, the best present to receive is a handmade item thoroughly created for you because behind it there are truly dedication and care for you person.

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ESSAY: Advantages and disadvantages of reciving differents types of presents.

(Task: Explain which of these types of presents is best to receive: luxuries or handmade items)

Every year when my friends’ birthdays are coming, I start to think about what which would be the perfect present for them. It might be an expensive luxurious item or maybe a charming handmade article; both alternatives seem to be feasible. However, in my opinion, to receive a handmade present is the best option by far.

Being unaffordable for the most, people feel happiness and gratitude when they receive a deluxe product as a gift. Although, some people feel uncomfortable and overwhelmed because they have the sense of they do not deserve such as expensive gifts. Others, even feel afraid of exhibiting or using this type of articles due to the high risk to be stolen.

In contrast, there are many advantages in receiving a gift made by another person. Firstly, to be in possession of a unique and original piece, which was created especially for you, will make you feel appreciated by the person who gives it to you. Secondly, handmade items allow saving money because it is an opportunity to use old stuff and recycle it. Probably, the main disadvantages of crafting are that this activity consumes time and requires a minimum of abilities to fabricate an object that does not look like a disaster.

In conclusion, the best present to receive is a handmade item thoroughly created for you because behind it there are truly dedication and care for you person.


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