Brazilian travelled for the first time
A saw a news in newspaper and I decided share here. I need to improve my English and my skills. So I need to talk about anything. A Brazilian woman is 73 years old traveling for the first time. She is from Ribeirão Preto, a big city in Brazil. She is housekeeper and she has never been travel of vacation for anywhere. She had afraid of plane, water and adventurous travel. Now, she accepted and she went to Maceió. Maceió is a beautiful place here in Brazil. There are many beaches, many places to go like museums, bars, coffees, parks and squares. The initiative of was her daughter. It was the first time that she went to a hotel, she flew, boating and she went to the beach. She loved meet new places, new people and new typics of food. I hope that Valmira can be travel more and more. I enjoy travelling!!!
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A Brazilian travelled travelling for the first time
A Brazilian woman who (you need a relative pronoun here to connect the two sentences) is 73 years old traveling travelled for the first time. She is from Ribeirão Preto, a big city in Brazil. She is a housekeeper and she has never been travel of been on vacation before for anywhere. She had was afraid of plane, flying, the water getting on a boat and adventurous travels. Now, She eventually took the chance to go to Maceió. Maceió is a beautiful place here in Brazil. There are many beaches and many places to go like museums, bars, coffees cafés, parks and squares. The initiative of was her daughter. Her daughter took the initiative (You could also say "Her daughter arranged everything for her"). It was the first time that she for her mum to went go to a hotel, fly , get on a boat and go to the beach. She loved meet visiting new places, meeting new people and tasting new types of food. I hope that Valmira can be travel can travel more and more in her future. I She really enjoyed travelling!!!
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Brazilian travelled for the first time
A saw a news article in a newspaper and I decided to share it here. I need to improve my English, so I need to talk about something (anything I can). A 73 years old Brazilian woman is travelling for the first time. She is from Ribeirão Preto, a big city in Brazil. She is a housekeeper and she had never been on a vacation (AmE; holiday in brE) anywhere. She had been afraid of planes, water and adventurous travels. She overcame her fear and she went to Maceió. Maceió is a beautiful place here in Brazil. There are many beaches, many places to go like museums, bars, cafés, parks and squares. She did it thanks to her daughter. It was the first time that she went to a hotel, flew, went on a boat ride and saw a beach. She loved discovering new places, meeting new people and trying new kinds of food. I hope that Valmira travels more and more in future. I enjoy travelling!!!1
A read some news in a newspaper and I decided to share it here. I need to improve my English and my skills. So I need to talk about anything I can. A Brazilian woman who is 73 years old was traveling for the first time. She is from Ribeirão Preto, a big city in Brazil. She is a housekeeper and she has never traveled anywhere on vacation. She was afraid of planes, water and adventurous travels. Then, she decided to go to Maceió. Maceió is a beautiful place here in Brazil. There are many beaches and many places to go like museums, bars, coffee shops, parks and squares. The initiator was her daughter. It was the first time that she went to a hotel, flew, went on a boat and went to the beach. She loved visiting new places, meeting new people and trying new types of food. I hope that Valmira can travel more and more. I enjoy travelling!!!
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