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II: Trip Plan After shopping, we will go to The Sapporo Snow Festival. There are art works made of snow there. Also we can see them at night, because there are lit up. Then, we will go to the Japanese style hotel. We will stay there at night. The second day is these plans. After have breakfast at the hotel, we will go to the zoo. There are animals living in cold areas. We can see the animals that spend the winter, also we can see penguins' walk. After the zoo, we will have lunch at this city. Hokkaido is famous for its delicious seafoods. If you don't like seafoods, you can eat onther meals. For example, you can eat Jingiskan. It is a Japanese grilled mutton dish. I would be happy if you want to go to Japan. Thank you.

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II: Trip Plan

After shopping, we'll go to The Sapporo Snow Festival where there are art works made of snow. Also, they are lit up so we can see them at night. Then, we will go to the Japanese style hotel where we'll stay the night. Plans for the second day are: After having breakfast at the hotel, we'll go to the zoo. Where there are animals from cold areas and we can see the animals that spend the winter, also we can see the penguins' walk. After the zoo, we will have lunch at Hokkaido which is famous for its delicious seafood. If you don't like seafood, you can eat other meals, for example Jingiskan, which is a Japanese grilled mutton dish. I would be happy for you to go to Japan. Thank you.


Your text is fine and I understood it very easily. My corrections will help you sound more natural, well done! ;-)

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