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First notebook entry: Ni hao! Ni hao! Wo jiao Angelina. Wo shi Maqidun ren. Wo hui Yingyu. Wo shi er shi er. Wo qu daxue xuexi Yingyu le. Wo ye qu daxue xuexi Hanyu le. Jintian wo gong. Wo fan Yingyu, Maqidunyu. Wo xihuan xuexi Hanyu.

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Ni3 hao3!
Wo3 jiao4 Angelina. Wo3 shi4 Maqidun(?) ren2. Wo3 hui4 shuo1 Ying1yu3. Wo2 shi4 er4 shi2 er4 sui4. Wo3 qu4 da4xue2 xue2xi2 Ying1yu3 le. Wo3 ye3 qu4 da4xue2 xue2xi2 Han4yu3 le. Jin1tian1 wo3 zai4 gong1zuo4. Wo3 fan(?) Ying1yu3, Maqidunyu(?). Wo3 xi3huan xue2xi2 Han4yu3.

You could use numbers for the tones, if your computer can´t write chinese :-)

I use the software "google pinyin installer" for writing chinese characters, it´s a freeware, you will find it on the net~

 

Good luck with chinese~

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First notebook entry: Ni hao!

Ni hao!
Wo jiao Angelina. Wo shi Maqidun ren. Wo hui Yingyu. Wo shi er shi er. Wo qu daxue xuexi Yingyu le. Wo ye qu daxue xuexi Hanyu le. Jintian wo gong. Wo fan Yingyu, Maqidunyu. Wo xihuan xuexi Hanyu.

This way will be better:

Nihao!

Wo jia Angelina. Wo shi Maqidun ren. Wo hui Yingyu. Wo er shi er sui. Wo zai daxue xue xi de Yingyu. Wo ye zai daxue xue xi de Hanyu. Jintian wo gong??? Wo fanyi Yingyu he Maqidunyu. Wo xihuan xuexi Hanyu.

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First notebook entry: Ni hao!

Ni hao!
Wo jiao Angelina. Wo shi Maqidun ren. Wo hui Yingyu. Wo shi er shi er (add "sui"). Wo qu daxue xuexi (le) Yingyu le. Wo ye qu daxue xuexi (le) Hanyu le. Jintian wo gong(this word I don't know...). Wo fan("hui") Yingyu, Maqidunyu. Wo xihuan xuexi Hanyu.

 

You should try to write it in Chinese.

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你好!

我叫Angelian.我是马其顿人。我会英语。我二十二(岁) 。我去大学学习了英语。我去大学学习了汉语。今天我(?)。我会英语,马其顿语。我喜欢学习汉语。

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First notebook entry: Ni hao!

Ni hao! 
Wo jiao Angelina. Wo shi Maqidun(Ma qi dun) ren. Wo hui Yingyu(ying yu). Wo shi er shi er sui. Wo qu daxue(da xue) xuexi(xue xi) Yingyu le. Wo ye qu daxue xuexi Hanyu(han yu) le. Jintian(Jin tian) wo gong. Wo fan Yingyu, Maqidunyu. Wo xihuan(xi huan) xuexi Hanyu.

1.In Chinese, you should take apart the phonics.or we can't understand sometimes.such as some vocabulary that we don't often use. Like 'Maqidunyu'.

2.you don't need to make the first letter become capital letter ,like in english.In Chinese, there's no concept of Proper Noun.

3.red means corrections.blue means mistakes you should pay attention to,but not serious.green means that i don't understand.maybe you made a mistake~please double check your word~and confirm it right or not.

4.i've transfered your passage to Chinese characters:

你好!我叫Angelina. 我是马其顿人,我会英语.我是二十二岁.我去大学学习英语了.我也去大学学习汉语了.今天我(gong?).我(fan?)英语,马其顿语.我喜欢学习汉语.

 

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http://pinyin.sogou.com/?s=alading this website can give you a hand on your writing of chinese characters

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