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Please, correct my mistakes Food is pleasure for me. I eat healthy foodб but I try to choose that dishes that I like. Because, if I eat meal unlikely for me after some time, I can began to eat fast food for pleasure. My typical day is look so, in the morning I usually prefer porridge with bites of bananas and jam, piece of bread with cheese and tea. For lunch I eat meal from my home, I cook several portions of food on Sundays and take it for lunch. I heat up it in the canteen in the office, it's usually meat with rise or pasta and some fresh vegetables. In the afternoon, I usually have fruits with youghurt. And in the evening, I have a proper meal. My boyfriend and me cook meat and salad. On weekends we often eat out, I rest from cooking. Sometimes I eat unhealthy food, but I don't do it very often. At that moment I am trying to cut down on the sweets so I change it on fruits and nuts

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Please, correct my mistakes

Food is a pleasure for me. I eat healthy foodб but I try to choose that dishes that I like because if I eat meals  unlikely for me that I don't like after some time a while, I can began start to eat fast food for pleasure.

My typical day is looks so like this: in the morning, I usually prefer porridge with bites bits of bananas and jam, a piece slice of bread with cheese, and tea. For lunch I eat a meal brought from my home, I cook several portions of food on Sundays and take it bring one for lunch each day during the workweek. I heat up it in the canteen in the office, it's usually meat with rise rice or pasta and some fresh vegetables. In the afternoon, I usually have fruits with youghurt yogurt. And in In the evening, I have a proper meal. My boyfriend and me I cook meat and salad.

On weekends we often eat out, I rest from don't cooking. Sometimes I eat unhealthy food, but I don't do it very often.

At that the moment I am trying to cut down on the sweets so, instead, I change it on eat fruits and nuts instead.

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Good job.

Note: in the last sentence, "fruits" could mean you eat multiple different kinds of fruit. If you wrote "I eat fruit  and nuts", it's unclear whether you eat just a single type of fruit, a single piece of fruit or more than one type of fruit or even multiple pieces of different fruit.

Second note: When I write, I try to be consistent throughout each paragraph in terms of number references in my sentences. Ex., "I bring a single meal for lunch", not "I bring meals", for instance, unless I actually did bring more than one portion. In your case, you are describing a single day, so I assume you are bringing just the meal for that particular day.

Hope this helps.

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Please, correct my mistakes

Food is a pleasure for me. I eat healthy food, but I try to choose only the dishes that I like. If I eat food that I do not enjoy, after a while, I may turn to fast food for pleasure.

My typical day is looks as follows: In the morning, I usually prefer porridge with bites of bananas and jam, a slice of bread with cheese and tea. For lunch, I eat meals from home. I cook several portions of food on Sundays and take it for lunch. I heat up it in the canteen in the office. It's usually meat with rice or pasta and some fresh vegetables. In the afternoon, I usually have fruit with yogurt. Finally, in the evening, I have a proper meal. My boyfriend and I cook meat and salad.

On weekends, we often eat out because I need rest from cooking. Sometimes I eat unhealthy food, but I don't do it very often.

Presently, I am trying to cut down on the sweets so I eat more fruits and nuts.
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Food is a pleasure for me. I eat healthy food but and  I try to choose dishes that I like. Because, if I eat meals that I dislike, after a while, I can will begin eating fast food for pleasure.

My typical day usually looks like that: In the morning I usually prefer porridge with slices of a banana and jam, a slice of bread with cheese and tea. For lunch, I eat meals prepared at home. I cook several portions of food on Sundays and take them with me for lunch. I heat up the prepared food in the canteen, ( Canteen is not probably the best option here but since I don't know exactly what you mean I will leave it as such) in the office. It's usually meat with rise or pasta and some fresh vegetables. In the afternoon, I usually have fruits with youghurt. And In the evening, I have a proper meal. My boyfriend and me I cook meat and salad.

On weekends we often eat out, I rest from avoid cooking( Or I prefer not to cook). Sometimes, I eat unhealthy food, but I don't do it very often.

At that moment I am trying to cut down on the sweets so I try to switch them for fruits and nuts
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sorry by mistake i did that thrice.
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I think you are doing well. I am unable to find any mistake, but you still need to work more on your vocabulary and sentence making. Good luck for your next work.

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