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oneday under sun shine with mom Dating with my mom in chungmooro. Mom and I both took a day off today. We talked what to eat and planed to where to go. She suggested eating chinese food. It was going well.( 순차적으로 자연스럽게 흘러갔다. )we didn’t eat breakfast so we ready very quick to picnic(나들이) . We arrived at chungmooro station but she don’t remember what exist. I think She called someone who know about that. But she cannot found out so just by her not clear remember, we start to find that restaurant. At first I threw tantrum I didn’t recognized. But 얼마안되서 not that long past, we found! Just right front station… I was so sorry to her, she just wanted to show that good dish for me. Anyway we ate full, started taking photo.. That was not part of our plan though, It was very natural step haha. My mom is good at taking photo! I found her talent! And weather help to us. Shine!! I couldn’t be happier! She made my day! Why I didn’t know mom is so precious person when I am little ? I am happy being daughter of my mom!! Thanks ! I love my mom and dad! Thanks for your care and love since now.

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one day in the sunshine with mom

Dating with my mom in chungmooro.

Mom and I both took a day off today. We talked about what to eat and planned where to go. She suggested some Chinese food. It was going well.( 순차적으로 자연스럽게 흘러갔다. )we didn’t breakfast so we were soon ready to picnic(나들이) .
We arrived at Cchungmooro station but she did not remember what was there. I think she called someone who knew about that. But she could not find out so as she did not clearly remember, we started to find a restaurant. At first I threw a tantrum that I hardly recognized. But 얼마안되서 not that long after that we found it! It was right in front of the station… I was so sorry for her, she just wanted to show me a good dish. Anyway we ate our fill and started taking photos.. That was not part of our plan, though it was a very natural step haha. My mom is good at taking photos! I found her talent! And the weather helped us. Shine!! I couldn’t be happier! She made my day!
Why didn’t I know mom was so precious person when I was little ?
I am happy being her daughter!! Thanks ! I love my mom and dad!
Thanks for all your care and love until today.

very well written!

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One Day Under Sunshine with Mom

Dating with my mom in chungmooro.

Mom and I both took a day off today. We talked about what to eat and planed where to go. She suggested eating chinese food. It was going well.( 순차적으로 자연스럽게 흘러갔다. ) We didn’t eat breakfast so we ready very quick to picnic(나들이) .
We arrived at chungmooro station but she didn't remember what exist. I think she called someone who knew about it. But she couldn't find out so just by her not clear remember, we start to find that restaurant. At first I threw a tantrum I didn’t recognized. But 얼마안되서 shortly, we found it!  Right in front of the station… I was so sorry, she just wanted to show that good dish for me. Anyway we ate , and started taking photos. That was not part of our plan though, It was a very natural step (haha). My mom is good at taking photos! I found her talent! And weather help to us. Shine!! I couldn’t be happier! She made my day!
Why didn’t I know mom was a precious person when I was little ?
I am happy being the daughter of my mom!! Thanks ! I love my mom and dad!
Thanks for your care and love.
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thanks for your advice. and just from curious, mom and I are so close then can't use "dating'"?
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Just so you know: "Dating" is something you do with a romantic partner, like a boyfriend or girlfriend. In this situation it's better to say "Spending time with my Mom" or "Hanging out with my mom."
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Nice pic!

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