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Education Education influences how people think, behave and live their lives. This is not because of the content they learned about but because it affects the way of thinking. We will expands our perspectives, accept our weakness and appreciate the beauty of the life. Otherwise you might stick to and believe in one idea. I saw many people answer 1 + 1 = 2, but many times this is not the case in reality. Education brings you more happiness, excitements and new ways of thinking.

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Education influences how people think, behave and live their lives.

This is not because of the content they learned (we learn?) about

but because it affects their  (our?) ways of thinking.

(Above you have written in third person plural “they”, then below this sentence, changed to “we” then finally “you”. Try to keep it more consistent :) 

We will Education expands our perspectives, helps us to accept our weaknesses and to appreciate the beauty of the life.


Otherwise youwe might stick to and believe in only one idea. I saw have seen many people answer that 1 + 1 = 2, but many times this is not the case in reality.

Education brings you (us?) more happiness, excitement and new ways of thinking.

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