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Dear Caroline,
Lovely to hear from you, I hope you are well.
My husband and I are happy with our new flat , We had finished the paint and decorated one week ago , we didn’t have done it before so I got my mother to help us with the interior design and the result was incredible She always have good ideas about that . Respect the furniture I found other kind , different my first option , However I think it looks better with the decorate , you should see all of that .
When you arrive to Lima tell me please and I will have to dinner in my new flat for your visit, I caught up with you about each details of my flat and you travel . You have to tell me a lot too , because I want to know the handsome guy who you took a lot of pics .
To end , Then our meet in my flat , We will go out for a drinks in a bar close to here, It looks good so If you want You can bring to someone else . Well …We will coordinate.
I hope to hear from you soon
Lots of love ,
Margot .
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Dear Caroline,
Lovely to hear from you, I hope you are well.
My husband and I are happy with our new flat , We finished the painting and decorated our house one week ago. We hadn't done it before so I made my mother help us with the interior design and the result was incredible. She always has good ideas. i found a new kind of furniture different from my first option. Although I think it looks better with the decoration , you should see all of that .
When you arrive in Lima, tell me please and I will make dinner in my new flat for you. I caught up with you about each details of my flat and your travel . You have to tell me a lot too , because I want to know the handsome guy with whom you took a lot of pics .
At the end , after our visit in my flat , we will go out for a drink in a bar close to here.It is a great place. So, If you want You can bring someone else, too . Well …We will coordinate.
I hope to hear from you soon
Lots of love ,
Margot .
Lovely to hear from you, I hope you are well.
My husband and I are happy with our new flat , We finished the painting and decorated our house one week ago. We hadn't done it before so I made my mother help us with the interior design and the result was incredible. She always has good ideas. i found a new kind of furniture different from my first option. Although I think it looks better with the decoration , you should see all of that .
When you arrive in Lima, tell me please and I will make dinner in my new flat for you. I caught up with you about each details of my flat and your travel . You have to tell me a lot too , because I want to know the handsome guy with whom you took a lot of pics .
At the end , after our visit in my flat , we will go out for a drink in a bar close to here.It is a great place. So, If you want You can bring someone else, too . Well …We will coordinate.
I hope to hear from you soon
Lots of love ,
Margot .
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