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Hi, My name is Nuray! Today I'm going to my favourite boysband concert. And I'm very happy. I don't know what to write here) now it's 1.06pm and I can't sleep/but I don't feel sleepy. I'm from kazakhstan, I live in a small city called Atyrau. I love swimming, and pilates.

Hi Nuraina 

Hereby the correction of your text. You can write notebook entries about any topic to practice your English!

Regards

Karen 

About me

Hi. My name is Nuray! Today I go ('I went' if it's already over)  to a concert of my favourite boysband. And I'm very happy. I don't no what to write here. It's 1.06 PM (AM?) right now but I can't sleep. I'm from Kazakhstan, I live in a small city called Atyrau. I love swimming and pilates.

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about me

Hi. My name is Nuray! Today i goes to concert of my lovely Boysband. And im very happy. I don't no what i must to write here) now 1.06pm but im not sleeping. I from kazakhstan, im living in small city Atyrau. I love swimming, and pilates.

Corrections

About Me with Notes:

Hi. My name is Nuray! Today I'm going to [did you already go? if it's in the past you can say I went to. or will you go soon? if you will go soon you can say I'm going to... to indicate a future action] my (suggestion: favorite) boy band's concert and I'm very happy. I don't know [or I'm not sure]what I must (suggestion: should) write here. Now it's 1:06pm but I'm not sleeping (did you mean to say sleepy?). I'm [I am] from Kazakhstan. I live in a small city called Atyrau. I love swimming and pilates. 

About Me Final Edits:

Hi. My name is Nuray! Today I'm going to [I went to] my favorite boy band's concert and I'm very happy. I don't know what I should write here. [or: I'm not sure what I should write here]. Now it's 1:06pm but I'm not sleeping/sleepy. I am from Kazakhstan. I live in a small city called Atyrau. I love swimming and pilates. 

Nice to meet you Nuray! You did a great job with this entry.

I hope my suggestions help you during your language journey.

Have a wonderful day!

Best wishes, 

-Arlena :)