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Broken-hearted 0816

I have heard a podcast on internet today. It talks about that people really possibly die from a broken-hearted.

But there were a little bit nuanced situation on it. For most of us when we suffer from breaking hearts, we will be fine in the end. Even though we muddle our way trough it, we will mend our broken-hearted eventually.

However the physical effects still happen. I fact, A big emotional stress will also press your body and lead to several diseases.

For some people, suppose they can not get recovery, would tend to die.

When I was in senior high school, I had ended a relationship and that was my first time to face a feeling of breaking hearts. But I was too young to deal with it. I ate lots of food one minute and ate nothing next minute, and hurting the health as a result.

As I got older, when I had recalled that experience, I suddenly realized that the sadness in the past has become a memory which won’t hurt anyone anymore.

After this life classes, I have found that to deal with own emotions is a big challenge for teenagers but no one teachs them.

So compare with learning knowledge, learning to response own emotions is also important for us.

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Broken-hearted

0816

I have heard / listened to a podcast on the internet today. It talks about people that really possibly die from a broken heart.

--> Use Simple Past to talk about a finished action that happened at a specific time. For example:
'I listened to a podcast.'' (When? Today/Yesterday/A month ago, etc)
    Use Present Perfect if your focus is the action itself, but the time isn't important. The name ''Present Perfect'' also helps, because even though it talks about an action that happened in the past, we care about the effects of that action in the Present.
''I have listened to a podcast.'' (And it doesn't matter when.)

--> We 'hear' something simply because we have ears, but when we pay attention to what we hear, then we 'listen'.

--> ''broken-hearted'' is and an adjective - for example ''He is a broken-hearted man.''.

But there were a little bit nuanced situation on it.
For most of us when we suffer from broken hearts / a broken heart, we will be are fine in the end.

--> when we connect two sentences using ''when'' and ''while'' , we use the same tense in both.

Even though we muddle our way trough it, we will  mend our broken hearts eventually.
However the physical effects still happen.
In fact, a big emotional stress will also press stress/affect your body and lead to several diseases.
For some people, suppose they can not get recovery, would they tend to die.
When I was a senior in high school, I had ended a relationship and that was my first time to face a feeling of breaking hearts a broken heart. But I was too young to deal with it. I ate lots of food one minute and ate nothing the next (minute - you can skip repeating the word), and hurting the my health as a result.
As I got older, when I had recalled that experience, I suddenly realized that the sadness in the past has become a memory which won’t hurt anyone anymore.
After this life classes lessons, (the phrase is ''life lesson'') I have found that to deal with their (because the subject of the sentence is ''teenagers'') own emotions is a big challenge for teenagers but no one teaches them.

So compared with learning knowledge, learning to response respond to our own emotions is also important for us.


Overall a very good text!
Keep up the good work.

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Thank everyone for correcting my writing !!
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"I listened to a podcast on the internet today. It was about the real possibility of dying from a broken heart. But there were a little bit nuanced situation on it. For most of us, when we suffer from a broken heart, we will be fine in the end. And even though we muddle our way through it, we will mend our broken heart eventually. However, the physical effects still happen. In fact, huge amounts of stress can lead to various diseases. For some people, if they do not receive help in time, they could eventually die. When I was in senior high school, I had ended a relationship, and that was my first time to face the feeling of a broken heart. But I was too young to deal with it. I ate lots of food one minute and nothing the next minute, damaging my health as a result. As I got older and looked back on the experience, I suddenly realized that the sadness in the past has become a memory which does not hurt anymore. After this class in the school of life, I have found that to deal with emotions is a huge challenge for teenagers, yet, no one teaches them. So compare with learning knowledge, learning to response own emotions is also important for us."

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