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Step On A Dogshit The picture is taked of in xuhui riverside, Shanghai. Nowadays, many people like to raise dogs. This cause a problem that dogshit is more than before. Walking on the road, you have to be carefull about it. In our community, more and more people complain about this matter. They ask the people raising dogs to deal with the shits. I think it is important to do it for our enviroment. It is interesting that we have a saying about it---"If you step on a dogshit, go to buy a lottery right now," we call it luck of dogshit, means that you have a high opportunity to win the price. So we should love it, right?

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Step On A Dogshit

The This picture is taked taken of in xuhui riverside, Shanghai. Nowadays, many people like to raise dogs. This cause caused a problem that and now, dogshit is more common  than before. Walking on the road, you have to be carefull careful about it. In our community, more and more people complain about this matter. They ask the people raising dogs to deal with the shits shit. I think it is important to do it for our enviroment.
It is interesting that we have a saying about it---"If you step on a dogshit, go to buy a lottery right now," we call it luck of dogshit, means that you have a high opportunity to win the price. So we should love it, right?


Great job! You did very well. And by the way, in the text, I removed “a” when you said “a dogshit” because in English, we classify dogpoop as plural, not singular. So it’s “dogshit” not “a dogshit.”

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Step On A Pile of Dog Shit

The picture is of in the xuhui riverside in Shanghai. Nowadays, many people like to raise dogs. This causes a problem in that there is more dog shit is more than before. Walking on the road, you have to be carefull careful about it. In our community, more and more people complain about this matter issue. They ask the people raising dogs to deal with the shits take care of their own dog's poop. I think it is important for our enviroment environment to do it so. 

It is interesting that we have a saying about it---"If you step on a dogshit, go to buy a lottery right now".  We call it the luck of dogshit which means that you have a high opportunity to win the price prize. So we should love it, right?


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The original was very understandable. As Andrea noted, "dog poop" is more commonly said than "dog shit" in the context of what you wrote. However, even more common is "a pile of dog shit", at least where I live.

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shit contains so many meaning, surpised me! thank you for shareing
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Side note: "dogshit" can be used in a cool colloquial way. It can be used to describe something that is bad, distasteful or foul-smelling. "I thought his performance was dogshit". "God, this place smells like dogshit!(not literally)". Or, if you want to be extra rude: "She looked like/smelled like/sounded like complete dogshit."
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嗨赖赖! I want to make a distinction between "shit" and "(the) shit(s)" :D Although both are considered vulgar and should typically not be used in formal/work situations, here are some examples of how they are used: SHIT: "My dog took a huge shit on the rug so I had to make a run to the store for some cleaning supplies". "I don't give a shit (care) what she thinks!" SHITS: "My friend shits his pants (is surprised) whenever his favorite band is playing near by" "I don't give two shits (care)about this project!" THE SHITS: This can really *only be used in one way. "the shits" = diarrhea. "Mexican food gives me the shits" THE SHIT: This can be used as slang for something awesome. "Man, that guy is the shit!" "Dude, please go see them in concert. They are the shit!"

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