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Which season do you like the best? Which season do you like the best? I would say winter. When I was in China especially when I was at the university in Beijing. It always snowed in winter. I liked the snow days. When I opened the window in the early morning, I found a beautiful white world. Snow was everywhere, on the roof, on the trees. When I headed up to look at the sky, the snow dropped on my face like a dancer dancing in the air. I always headed to The Summer Palace on the snowing days. It was the photo op. I took many beautiful photos and enjoyed the breathtaking views there. I got so many amazing memories of the winter in Beijing. Now I live in Melbourne Australia. It doesn't snow in winter. But it is still a bit cold outside. I feel a little bit bored in winter here since I always stay at home with my heater on. If you ask me which season do you like the best now? Summer! In summer, I got a lot of activities, such as go down to the beach, swim in the sea. I am going to learn snorkelling this summer. I am not very good at swimming. But I enjoy the activities near the sea. I like the feeling the wind blows on my face and listen to the waves.

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Which season do you like the best?

Which season do you like the best?
I would say winter. I especially liked winter when i was at university in Beijing*. It always snowed in winter. I liked the snow days. When I would opened the window in the early morning, I would find a beautiful white world. Snow was everywhere, on the roof, on the trees. When I headed up out to look at the sky, the snow dropped on my face like little white dancers, dancing in the air. I always headed to The Summer Palace on the snowing days. It was has the best photo op. I  took many beautiful photos and enjoyed the breathtaking views there. I got have so many amazing memories of the winter in Beijing.


Now I live in Melbourne Australia. It doesn't snow in winter. But it is still a bit cold outside. I feel a little bit bored in winter here since I always stay at home with my heater on.
If you ask me which season do you I like the best now? Summer! In summer, I got  do a lot of activities, such as go down to the beach, swim in the sea. This summer I am going to learn snorkelling. I am not very good at swimming. But I enjoy the activities near the sea. I like the feeling of the wind blowing on my face and listening to the waves.

* China is implied by saying you attended university in Beijing.


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Which season do you like the best?

Which season do you like the best?
I would say winter. When I was in China especially when I was at the university in Beijing. (Incomplete sentence)

It always snowed in winter. I liked the snow days. When I opened the window in the early morning, I found a beautiful white world. Snow was everywhere, on the roof, on the trees. When I headed up to look at the sky, the snow dropped on my face like a dancer dancing in the air. I always headed to The Summer Palace on the snowing days. It was the photo op. I took many beautiful photos and enjoyed the breathtaking views there. I got so many amazing memories of the winter in Beijing.


Now I live in Melbourne Australia. It doesn't snow in winter. But it is still a bit cold outside. I feel a little bit bored in winter here since I always stay at home with my heater on.
If you ask me which season do you like the best now? Summer! In summer, I got ("I got" is like obtaining possession, "I have" is more correct) a lot of activities, such as go down to the beach, swim in the sea. I am going to learn snorkelling this summer. I am not very good at swimming. But I enjoy the activities near the sea. I like the feeling the wind blows on my face and listen to the waves.

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Fall is my favorite. The air smells wonderful, and all the trees are so beautiful. Your writing is very good. It might be good practice to try and write without using "I" at the begging of this many sentences. It is good to learn how to vary your sentence structure and word usage.
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snow days works. Just want to mention, you can also use the adjective, "snowy" just like you can use "cloudy, sunny, rainy, etc."

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