The grey rain
It's raining for the entire day. Everything is grey and gloomy. Raindrops are knocking monotoniously on umbrellas and on windows. A street dog is sitting sadly under the tree, trying to shelter from the rain. The rain is going, and going, and going... Its monotoniously knocking makes me lazy and sleepy. It looks like the Autumn has come already, although it's still the middle of August.
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The grey rain
It has been raining for the entire day. Everything is grey and gloomy. Rain drops are dropping knocking monotonously on umbrellas and on windows. A street dog is sitting sadly under the tree, trying to seeking shelter from the rain. The rain is pouring continuously. going, and going, and going... Its monotonous pouring knocking makes me lazy and sleepy. It looks like the autumn has come already, although it's still the middle of August.Well written, just a few minor errors. 雪碧 (Shapi= Sprite?)
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Is this poet? Thanks for sharing it, I just read your post and got absorbed by the atmosphere (I don't know if this is the right word for what I want to say) of your works.
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