Writing: graph analysis This line graph illustrates the change in sales for four different online shops (Shop A, Shop B, Shop C, and Shop D) in 2010. There are gaps in the growth in sales among the four shops. For example, while shop C increased the sales through the year, the sales for shop A and shop D declined. That of shop B remained stable. Shop C showed a dramatic change in sales from January to December. The number of sales was only 100, which was the smallest, at the beginning of the year. However, it started to rise gradually and surpassed the sale for Shop D, which was in the third lank of the sale, in July. By the end of the year, the number of sales became over 400, and it was the second largest number of the four shops. Shop A also showed an impressive change in sales. In January, the number of sales was 500. Then, it increased to almost 700 but decreased sharply. After that, it kept rising with a little fluctuation and reached a peak(700) in October. However, it declined again for two months, and finally, it reached the same number of sales as that in January. *I'm happy if you check the grammar and coherence. Thanks in advance.