Something About Barber Shop （Thank you for correcting any error）
Every time I go to a barber shop to have my hair cut, the barbers are always trying to sell me something.
First, the barber will make a chitchat with you, when they find your hair a little bit stiff, they want you to try their hair-soften production. When you are losing some hair, they already want you to grow some new ones. This is quite typical in my country and I find it very annoying.
Sometimes I just want to let my mind wandering aimlessly for half an hour and enjoy some leisure time.
What do you think?
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Hi Chandler
In addition to Annie's excellent suggestions, I wanted to add a few of my own.
Well done with your English and know that your experience in barber shops is the same everywhere!
Kind regards
Carolina
Something About Barber Shops （Thank you for correcting any errors）
Every time I go to a barber shop to have my hair cut, the barbers always try to sell me something. We use this tense because it is something that happens over and over again, not just once.First, the barber will make a chitchat with you, then when they find your hair a little bit dry, they want you to try their conditioner. If you are losing some hair, they already want you to help you grow more. This is quite typical in my country and I find it very annoying.
Sometimes I just want to let my mind wander aimlessly for half an hour and enjoy some alone-time.
What do you think?
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Something About Barber Shops （Thank you for correcting any errors）
Every time I go to a barber's shop to have my hair cut, the barbers are always trying to sell me something.First, the barber will begin making a chitchat with you, then when they find your hair is a little bit stiff, they want you to try their hair-softener production. When you are losing some hair, they already want you to grow some new ones hair. This is quite typical in my country and I find it very annoying.
Sometimes I just want to let my mind wandering aimlessly for half an hour and enjoy some leisure time.
What do you think?
Hello,
it's the same here too in Portugal, and in hairdressers, as well as in barber shops. I too like to have the thinking time. Maybe it is all part of the experience?
Best wishes,
Annie
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Thank you Mr. Hansen.
I will work hard and improve~
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I like how you contrast the will of the barber with your own will and explain the nature of the difference with two examples. I found it very easy to read what you wrote, and I believe that if you write more people will enjoy reading that as well.
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