would you correct my words?
1. I can go fast everywhere by using my own car than using a public transportation.
2. Let's Imagine that using a public transportation, you have to wait for a bus or subway for a while. and after? you may have to stand until the bus alive.
3. The mobile phone has upgraded more and more. So these days we can use internet everywhere by using the mobile phone.
4. You can ask the expert to something you don't know on the internet even if you are at home.
(You can ask something detail to an expert on the internet.)
5. As mobile phone developed, the crime using them also developed as well.
although so, I can't deny that the mobile phone is the greatest invention lately.
6. As the internet developed, we can call the people living in other countries.
7. In reality, no matter how big the shop is, they can't have all of the product. But the Internet can do that.
8. Even if I live in the countryside, I also can look around a lot of things from all over the world as if I live in NewYork.
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I'd try my best to correct the rest of the sentences.
However, I can't deny that the a mobile phone is the greatest invention lately.
6. As the Internet keeps improving, we can call the people who lives in other countries.
7. In reality, no matter how big the shop is, it can't obtain the goods from all over the world. But the Internet can do that.
8. Thanks to the Internet! Even if I lived in the countryside, I would also be able to look around a lot of things from all over the world as if I lived in New York.
Good sentences, Jia.
I notice that you still have difficulty on using a/the pronoun. In fact, it's one of the confusing subject in English. Good news is there are tons of example in the Internet world.
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Hi Jia
I corrected the first few for you. :)
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Would you correct my sentences?
1. I can get around faster using my car instead of public transport.2. Let's Imagine using public transportation. You have to wait for a bus or the subway for a while. and after that? you may have to stand until the bus arrives at your destination.
3. The mobile phone is continuously being upgraded. So these days we can surf the internet everywhere by using a mobile phone.
4. You can get expert advice on any topic via the internet without leaving home.
(You can ask something detail to an expert on the internet.)
5. As mobile phone developed, the crime using them also developed as well.
although so, I can't deny that the mobile phone is the greatest invention lately.
6. As the internet developed, we can call the people living in other countries.
7. In reality, no matter how big the shop is, they can't have all of the product. But the Internet can do that.
8. Even if I live in the countryside, I also can look around a lot of things from all over the world as if I live in NewYork.
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