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Summer with family or summer with friends. What do you think I should do? Hi Sara. This morning I have received your letter and I have read your problem. It is a difficult situation because I wouldn't know what to do. I think it is better to travel with your parents because they are young now. Besides they are always working and rarely they have a vacations. It's more fun to travel with friends but with them you can travel at anytime and with your parents you can not. I wish I had helped you, although it is a decision that only you can make. See you.

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Summer with family or summer with friends. What do you think I should do? OK

Hi Sara. OK

This morning I have received your letter and I have read your problem.

This sentence is more or less grammatically correct, but it sounds a little unnatural. Here is my suggestion:

I received your letter this morning and I understand your problem.

It is a difficult situation because I wouldn't know what to do. OK

I think it is better to travel with your parents because they are young now. OK

Besides, they are always working and rarely they have a vacations.

It's more fun to travel with friends, but with them you can travel at anytime and with your parents you can not.

I wish I had could helped you, although but it is a decision that only you can make.

See you.

Not badly written at all, just a few minor grammar points.

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Summer vacation with your family or your friends. What do you think I should choose?

Hi Sara.
This morning I have received your letter and I haveknew about your problem. It is really difficult for me to suggest you how to do.
I think it is better to travel with your parents because they are not young now. Besides they are always working and  they rarely have any vacations all life.
Although It's more fun to travel with friends and you have plenty of chance to do as this rather than with your parents .
I wish I could help you, but it is up to you.
See you.

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