Please, correct my mistakes It was a August the thirteenth, Sunday. I wake up at 7:00, it was very early for Sunday, but I had a rich of activities day. I took a shower, brushed my teeth and brush m

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Alena

Please, correct my mistakes It was a August the thirteenth, Sunday. I wake up at 7:00, it was very early for Sunday, but I had a rich of activities day. I took a shower, brushed my teeth and brush my hair by comb. I put my cream on the face but didn't put makeup, because I was going to massage and I would take of it eventually. After that I cooked my breakfast. I usually made a porrige with jam and a bites of bananas. Also I filled the tea and cut a bite of cheese. During my breakfast I was looking through my social networks. From 07:50 till 8:15 I was studying English, I did several gramma exercises. I had a massage in my gym in the centre of the city at 9:00 o'clock, so I get to gym by bus. I had a some problem with my back, so I am visiting a massage three times a week. I had to be at home at 11:00, because I and my sister were going to our parents in our hometown, and she had to take me on car from my home at 11:00. So I took Uber after massage and went home. In the morning when the weather was wery gloomy, but during our small trip clouds gone and the sun began to shine very vividly. We spent about two hour and half in the road to hometown. I was talking with my sister, repeating new words in memrise and sleeping about one hour. We arrived at 13:40 to our parents. We with our mother were picking berries and talking. After that we took a tea with bakerys, discussed with our mother and father the latest news and went to home. We returned about nine o'clock in the evening. I and my boyfriend took the dinner, watched a several series of theshow. Then until 11 o clock'c I was studing English. And after that I went to sleep

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Hi Alena, here are a few suggestions. Quite a tricky piece to write because of the different tenses!

Andrew

It was a Sunday, August the thirteenth, Sunday. I woke up at 7:00, it was very early for Sunday, but I had a rich day of activities day. I took a shower, brushed my teeth and brush my hair by with a comb. I put my cream on the my face but didn't put any makeup on, because I was going to get a massage and I would take of it eventually.

After that I cooked my breakfast. I usually made a porridge with jam and a bites of bananas. Also I filled the tea and cut a bite of cheese.

During my breakfast I looked ing through my social networks. From 07:50 till 8:15 I studied ng English, and I did several grammar exercises. I had a massage in my gym in the centre of the city at 9:00 o'clock, so I went there get to gym by bus. I have d a some problems with my back, so I am visiting a massage three times a week.

I had to be at home at 11:00, because I and my sister and I were going to visit our parents in our hometown, and she was going to get me had to take me on car from my home in her car at 11:00. So I took Uber after my massage and went home.

Please, correct my mistakes

I woke up at 7:00 am in Sunday, August 13th. Then I had to do many tasks. I took a shower, brushed my teeth and combed my hairs. If I used cosmetic before massage, then I had to take it off or remove it before massage.

(I only corrected paragraph one)

After that I cooked my breakfast. I usually made a porrige with jam and a bites of bananas. Also I filled the tea and cut a bite of cheese.

During my breakfast I was looking through my social networks. From 07:50 till 8:15 I was studying English, I did several gramma exercises. I had a massage in my gym in the centre of the city at 9:00 o'clock, so I get to gym by bus. I had a some problem with my back, so I am visiting a massage three times a week.

I had to be at home at 11:00, because I and my sister were going to our parents in our hometown, and she had to take me on car from my home at 11:00. So I took Uber after massage and went home.

In the morning when the weather was wery gloomy, but during our small trip clouds gone and the sun began to shine very vividly. We spent about two hour and half in the road to hometown. I was talking with my sister, repeating new words in memrise and sleeping about one hour.

We arrived at 13:40 to our parents. We with our mother were picking berries and talking. After that we took a tea with bakerys, discussed with our mother and father the latest news and went to home.

We returned about nine o'clock in the evening. I and my boyfriend took the dinner, watched a several series of theshow. Then until 11 o clock'c I was studing English. And after that I went to sleep

Hi Alena,

I had to do it in 2 sections because it was too long...

In the morning, when the weather was very gloomy, but during our small trip the clouds had gone and the sun began to shine very vividlybrightly. We spent about two hour and a half hours on in the road to our hometown. I was talking with my sister, repeating new words in memrise and sleeping for about one hour.

We arrived at 13:40 to at our parents. We w With our mother were we went picking berries and talking. After that we took a tea with pastries and bakerys, discussed with our mother and father the latest news with our mother and father before going and went to home.

We returned about nine o'clock in the evening. I and mMy boyfriend and I took the ate dinner and watched a several series of the show. Then I until 11 o clock'c I was studied ng English until 11 o clock and after that I went to sleep

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