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would you help me? :) i wanted to write about "advantages of pets" would you let me know where is error? having pets have a lot of advantages and disadvantages. I agree this statement. firstly for a children, keeping animals allows them to learn the value of life. also they can have a best friends of their life. secondly , after retirement, a lot of old people are usually bored. then having a pet may be a nice solution to them. in my grandfather's case, I think maybe he is so bored. he never keep a animal before, but nowdays he is keeping animals. and he is very satisfied to keep a dog and cats

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i wanted to write about "advantages of pets" 
would you let me know where is error?

having pets have a lot of advantages and disadvantages.
In the following I go through the advantages of having pets
firstly, for a children, keeping animals allows them to learn the value of life. also they can be have a the best friends of their life.

secondly , after retirement, a lot of old people are get usually bored. then so having a pet may be a nice appropriate solution to them.
in my grandfather's case, take my grandfather for instance I think maybe he is so bored. 
he never keep kept an animal before, but nowdays he is keeping animals and he is very satisfied to by having keep a dog and cat. 
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i wanted to write about "advantages of pets" would you let me know where is error? having pets have a lot of advantages and disadvantages. I agree this statement. firstly for a children, keeping animals allows them to learn the value of life. also they can have a best friends of their life. secondly , after retirement, a lot of old people are usually bored. then having a pet may be a nice solution to for them. in my grandfather's case, I think maybe he is so bored. he never keepkeeps ( or has kept) a animal before, but nowdays he is keeping animals. and he is very satisfied to keep a dog and or cat
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. I agree this statement. firstly for a children, keeping animals allows them to learn the values of life . also they can have a best friends in their life. secondly , after retirement, a lot of old people are usually bored. then having a pet may be a nice solution to them. in my grandfather's case, I think maybe he is so bored. he never keeps a animal before, but nowdays he has been animals. and he is very satisfied to keep a dog and cats

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