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Essay #206 "Social Networks" 12.08.18

First, the internet has widened people’s opportunities to meet other people. Today we are not restricted to our social environment or physical borders. Thus we are able to meet more interesting people and befriend them. The ability to add strangers into our friend list is just a way to create new friends; it's efficient and any person right now can find someone to talk with in absolutely no time.

On internet social networks, people can introduce and write something about themselves through their profile pages. This is a great feature as it makes it easier for other people to find someone else with mutual interests. This creates a completely new approach to communication between people, therefore, sometimes internet friendships can be very strong and long-lasting as it often finds roots in common interests and hobbies.

Internet conversations differ from the real life ones:  it is more informal and quite common on the internet to say “Hi” to a complete stranger. Whereas in real life and in many cases, it will be inappropriate or strange. It's definitely easier to make friends online. That is why so many people, after having met online, go on to make new friendships in real life.

To conclude, internet technology has presented us with a great amount of opportunities and has absolutely changed our social lives. Despite the fact that many people are still suspicious about internet friendships, more and more people find many interesting people online and even go on to make new friendships in real life. As one of the conveniences of the modern era, the internet can make our lives more interesting and we should definitely use it to make friends.

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Internet social networks create a completely new approach to communication between people. Profile pages allow people to introduce and write something about themselves. This is a great feature as it makes it easier for other people to find someone else with mutual interests. Therefore, internet friendships can be very strong and long-lasting as it often finds roots in common interests and hobbies.
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Also, On internet social networks, have a feature which is great, and this feature is a profile page, where people can introduce and write something about themselves through their profile pages. This is a great feature So, as it makes it easier for other people to find someone else with mutual interests. This creates an absolutely completely new approach to communication between people, therefore, sometimes internet friendships can be very strong and long-lasting as it often finds roots in common interests and hobbies.

Another thing that differs Internet conversations differ from the real life ones: is that it is more informal and it is quite common on the internet to say “Hi” to a complete stranger. Whereas in real life and in many cases, it will be inappropriate or strange. so It's definitely easier to make friends online. That is why so many people, after having met online, and have proceeded their go on to make new friendships in real life.

To conclude, internet technology has presented us with the a great amount of opportunities and has absolutely changed our social lives. Despite the fact that many people are still suspicious about internet friendships, more and more people find many interesting interlocutors people online and even proceed this go on to make new friendships in real life. So, the internet is As one of the conveniences of the modern era, the internet which can make our lives more interesting and easier and we should definitely should use it to make friends.

Essay #206 "Social Networks" 12.08.18