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Heavy Rain After seveal hot days, heavy rainy is coming. Watching out from a window, all things looked blur. Some people running on the way without umbrella. Actually, umbrella can do nothing to the rain as wind is too strong. A little girl following her mother trys her best to hold the umbrella , as the strong wind make the umbrella run away from her. Suddenly I think of garage, my dirty car is in it. It is a good time to wash car. I go downstairs to the garage to drive my car out . My car takes a shower in the rain, several minutes later , it becomes shining. When I go back to park my car, I find that my neighbor is doing the same thing, we are two lazy men.

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Heavy Rain

After seveal several hot days, heavy rainy is coming. Watching out from a window, all things looked blurry. Some people were running on the way around without an umbrella. Actually, an umbrella can do nothing to the in this rain as the wind is too strong. A little girl following her mother trys tries her best to hold the umbrella , as the strong wind makes the umbrella run away from her.
Suddenly I think of my garage, my dirty car is in it. It is a good time to wash the car. I go downstairs to the garage to drive my car out . My car takes a shower in the rain, several minutes later , it becomes shining. When I go back to park my car, I find that my neighbor is doing the same thing, we are two lazy men.


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Heavy Rain

After several hot days, heavy rainy is coming. Watching out from a window, all things looked blurry. Some people were running on the way without an umbrella. Actually, an umbrella can do nothing to the rain as wind is too strong. A little girl following her mother, trying her best to hold the umbrella , as the strong wind made the umbrella run away from her. (You can also say that the wind blew the umbrella away from her)
Suddenly I think of my garage. My dirty car is inside. This is a good time to wash the car. I go downstairs to the garage to drive my car outside.  My car takes a shower in the rain. Several minutes later, it becomes shiny. When I go back to park my car, I find that my neighbor is doing the same thing. We are two lazy men.

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