Corrections · 2
Why read Fables to children?
To read Reading Ffables to children is one of the better ways to do have them reflect about on a particular thought (other options: story, moral, lesson). Besides being a great shape kind of entertainment, the moral of history the story ends up being a perfect a moment for the parents to give a new lesson to they their children, teaching moral values.Great start!
Notes on corrections:
No need to capitalize fables.
Instead of the infinitive "To read," a more common construction in English is using the gerund form, "Reading."
"Reflect on a particular thought" is a bit of a strange phrase in English. One can't really reflect on a thought, one has to reflect on a particular issue or topic. What are the children reflecting on specifically, the moral of the fables? I gave a few options here.
Shape is used more for a physical size or description of an object. I substituted "kind" here to specify a type of entertainment.
The rest of the corrections are mostly related to correct prepositions and verb agreement.
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