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Short Trip I have worked as sales promotion rep since yesterday. The place is far from my home, so it was like a short trip.

I like taking train because I love th sound of Clickety‐clack.

By the way I will have my first language exchange tomorrow. I'm looking forward to it very much.

See you;）

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Short Trip

Yesterday I have started worked as a sales promotion representative. since yesterday. The place My work is far from my home, so it was like going on a short trip.

I like taking the train because I love the sound of the Clickety‐Clack.

By the way, I will have my first language exchange tomorrow. I'm looking forward to it very much.

See you. ;）

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A Short Trip

I have worked as a sales promotion rep/representative since yesterday.

(or) I started working as a sales promotion rep yesterday.  

My work place is far from my home, so going to work was like taking a short trip.

I liked taking the train to work because I love the clickety‐clack sound of trains.

By the way, I will have my first language exchange tomorrow. I'm looking forward to it very much.

See you;）


1) Usage note on present perfect (I have started) and simple past (Yesterday, I started)

https://www.ef.com/english-resources/english-grammar/present-perfect-vs-simple-past/

2) clickety-clack (not a proper noun, so should be lower case)


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I'm sorry, I couldn't find what you corrected. so I was not angry. I'm sorry．
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have removed my entry, sorry again hikaru

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