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Question in Entrance exam
Should all high school students be required to do community work, such as helping the elderly or disabled?Why or why not?
I don't think all high school students should be required to do community work. I have two reasons. Firstly, studying in high school is very difficult. So students should focus on studying. Secondly, I think if they want to contribute to their community, they should study harder.
I think 'they'd better' is a somewhat casual expression. In a somewhat formal context, I would use 'they should' instead.
When they start to work after university, they can do much more useful things for other people. High school students can only do what they are told to do by adults.
'Only do' sounds more natural to me, but I don't think this is a big deal.
However, people with higher education can do what they want to do and can do more helpful things than students can. In conclusion, I don't think all high school students should be required to do community work.
(I wonder if this passage makes sense. Does it?)
Your passage definitely makes sense! It is easy to read and understand.
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